Monday, August 6, 2007

Climbing Rhyme for Mickeybear

This poem is a Climbing Rhyme, inspired by classical Burmese poetry. This was a challenging and fun form!


My Mickeybear ~ by Marilyn MonREOW

No mancat can compare
To my Mickeybear; tender
Loving care I supply
As his Kittypie. I
Say, "Aye, my dear"
When he appears. Paw
to ear, pure white,
His eyes bright, my
Love alight, my amour.
All his contours please
Me more every day
In every way. So
I say to him: je t'adore.

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi Marilyn,

Wonderful Climbing Rhyme your Mickeybear will love it I'm sure...Hugs and Purrs Ariel

mister jeter harris, hizself said...

Oh Marilyn,
The spontaneous Etheree was so easy! Your Climbing Rhyme is purrfect. I'll study it until I can send you one that you deserve!
Thank you!
Your,
Mick

Christine and FAZ said...

Marilyn - there is no end to your talent; beautiful, witty and intelligent. Mickey is one lucky guy.

Anonymous said...

Wow that is a really beautify Climbing Rhyme and so full of love for your Mickey.

Cats~Goats~Quotes said...

That is an excellent Climbing Rhyme!
Mickey and Marilyn..what a pair!

~ Bandit

Daisy said...

Oh, the Climbing Rhyme seems very hard to write! That's a good one you made, too.

Anonymous said...

Hi Marilyn,

It's me Again.I made up a Meme and I tagged you please go to my blog and see...Hugs and Purrs Ariel

Gretchen said...

I love your climbing ryhme. That looks very difficult. You're a great poet. I'm just a kittie-poet-wanna-be. I haven't been to poetic lately. My bean has been having some down time so when she's not sparked, neither am I. I'm going back to sit with her again while she reads.

Hugs...G

Kate (Pablo's mum) said...

Wow! It's like a rap! You could sell this one to Dr Dre or Busta Rhymes, for sure! Oh, or Missy Elliot!