Friday, July 25, 2008

A Triolet for Mickeybear


It would be my bliss to kiss
White whiskers, long and silky
Oh, how I have sorely missed
White whiskers, long and silky!
At blogging, I have been remiss:
Please forgive me, Mickey!
It would be my bliss to kiss
White whiskers, long and silky.

Okay, I fudged the rhyme "Mickey" with "Silky", but in my opinion, the words fit one another purrfectly. *smile*

34 comments:

Cheysuli and gemini said...

I bet Mickeybear loves it!

Sweet Praline said...

What a neat poem. I am sure Mickeybear would love whatever you wrote.

Sorry we haven't visited in a couple of days. Mom's laptop crashed and she is still feeling yechy.

Cats said...

Great poem ~ we agree ~ Mickey must've really enjoyed it..

Gretchen and Mike said...

Lovely words just the same.

Hugsabunches...G

Felix, Garfield & Jawsy said...

It's a fluff we know Mickey will not mind at all. :)
Have a happy weekend!

Lux said...

That's beautiful, Marilyn. Mickey's gonna love it!

Pablo said...

It's a beautiful poem, and I think that poetic license is allowed with the rhyme (if you can't use poetic license when writing poetry, when can you?)

Anita said...

Wow! Your boyfriend are a so cute mancat... Muahahahaha!

Copito said...

I ♥ your magic eyes, blondie!

DEBRA said...

Hi Miss Marilyn

Don't you look stunning today!

We are sure your Mickey is going to love his poem, it was so beautiful.

Purrs
Abby

Titus said...

Lovely poem, my whitester friend.

Tybalt said...

Marilyn, you have a true gift for poetry!

Daisy said...

That's very romantic!

jh an Mickey Mantle said...

Oh Marilyn,
It would be my bliss to kiss your white whiskerz long and silky ...
This is a beautiful triolet.
Love--Your Mick

jh an Mickey Mantle said...

Dearest Marilyn ...
I am unblocked! hurrah ... hurrah!
Please see what I have for you on my page!
Love--Mickey

Eric and Flynn said...

That is a lovely poem for Mickey, and as the poet, you can use the words as you wish.

Ana said...

Aww, love makes you so poetic, wonderful! Mickey is such a lucky mancat!

Ariel said...

Hi Marilyn,

I love it and I'm sure Mikey will too...Hugs your future sister in-law
Ariel :)

Zippy, Sadie and Speedy said...

Oh, sweet.

Camie's Kitties said...

That is a great poem for Mickey. Obviously, he loved it.

Tiki, Tavi, Cody, Camie and Miss Jade

Sweet Praline said...

My mom can be a little dense at times. The connection between Marilyn Monreow and Mickeybear just clicked with her! Duh! I told her I knew about it all the time.

I am please that you enjoyed my photos today on the meme.

lordjaders said...

Silky whiskerrrs--I like how that sounds...
Ms. Monrrreow I hope all is well with you. I just haven't been able to blog as much as I would like, but I'm happy to hearrr you arrre still in love with Mrrr. Mantle and you still wrrrite beautiful poetrrry.

Purrrs to you.

katztales said...

Poetry on Sundays - lovely... But now Target and Au want poems lauding them too!

PS I like the way you have one red eye and one green one.

jh an Mickey Mantle said...

marilyn ...
it'z jh.
i think u ar in da story dat iz bein ritten at g + g'z place dis verree minit.
we mus keep it frum mi brudder.
yerz--jh (oh ... u know dat already)

Gandalf and Grayson said...

Marilyn, imagine our surprise to see you featured in our steamy love story today! ;) Thanks for playing along!

zevo hussein calamari said...

He must love you sooooo much!

Thank you so much for all the get well wishes and healing purrs for Nubi.
xoxoxo

Quasi said...

Marilyn, just in case...I have white whiskers, too! By the way, you might enjoy listening to my new iMix, called "Quasi's Cool Cat iMix." The list of songs is on my blog at theworldisyourlitterbox.blogspot.com if you don't have iTunes.

JB's Big World said...

Wonderful triolet! Mickey must adore you!
--JB

Cairo The Boxer said...

I love the poem! Do you teach poetry?

Jackson said...

Hello, what a pawsome poem!
Thank you for dropping by me blog and your kind words. It really means a lot to me and the Js. J x

Evergreen loves Kilroy said...

Oh, such a lovely poem! It would make the manliest mancat swoon!

MISS PEACH ~(^.^)~ said...

Oh beautiful sister darling! I have been remiss at visiting but you are always in my thoughts and in my heart. Mommy needs to help me visit more and not just run around the cottage and garden like a crazy woman! Sit down mommy and pay attention to my friends! Her headache keeps her up or down...it is better right now. The weather is cooler and she loves that!
Keep yourself well and know how much I love you no matter how busy the mommies get!
Your adoring sister Peachy

jh an Mickey Mantle said...

deer marilyn,
it'zza good thing yer still on da triolet ...
mi brudder iz havin sum trubbel werkin on hiz lento.
luv--jh

Mr.O'Malley said...

hi beauTeful marilyn i just stoped by to say hello
i love you cole and Mr omalley